I am inclined to agree with what G.L.Strachey claimed. From all inventions of ancient civilizations the language is the best one. It is considered to be the definition of humanity because there where people are there language exists. Some arguments are provided in order to prove that language is the most astonishing creation of humans.
Firstly, language is a means of communication in any society. It is a system of symbols through which people express their thoughts, ideas, feelings and understand each other, in a word communicate. Generally, people use language in every single action they daily do. People realize that language can exist only in the human society because it is an result which appears after what people interact. This is due to the fact that man is the only being who has the ability of speaking. The language is the characteristic possessed by people which differentiate them from animals.
In the second place, people can use other means of communication such as symbols and signs which are interpreted in the human language. The symbols and signs are shared by the members of one community. Symbols may be spoken, written or signed with the hands. There are some types of signs which are natural, conventional and linguistic. Natural signs are those which happen around people as natural result and which communicate a certain message. For example, a footprint is a natural sign left on a soft surface. In contrast, people are likely to use more conventional signs. Conventional signs are the auditory and visual devices created in order to transmit messages from one person to another. They have different meanings in different situations. The linguistic signs are the abstract structures which participate in a linguistic system or language.
Thirdly, people use either verbal communication or non-verbal one. The non-verbal communication is called body language too. It has a special term "Kinesics" which refers to body movements, facial expressions, eye contact, gestures, body possitions, forms of greeting and their relation to communication. Some kinds of body movements such as yawning, stretching are physiological, others like staring, showing a victory sign are personally and culturally determined.
Later, nobody can say exactly how language came into being. It is only known that humans appeared first and then the language. This leads to some theories according to which it is believed that the language was created by man. First of all, they say that language is a gift of the Gods to humans. Next, humans evolved a Language Acquisitions Device. One theory suggests this perhaps gave Homo sapiens an advantage over Homo neatherthalis. Some other 6 theories are divided into invention or imitation hypotheses and neccessity hypotheses. Invention or imitation hypotheses are: ding-dong hypothesis, pooh-pooh hypothesis, bow-wow hypothesis and ta-ta hypothesis while the necessity hypotheses are: warning hypothesis, yo-he-ho hypothesis and lying hypothesis. These hypotheses state different points why people began to speak by in the end they claim that language appeared due to humans.
In conclusion, I would like to point out that language is a very significant property possessed by people. It is a characteristic which gives everybody the possibilty to communicate, express his/her thoughts, opinions and maintain certain relations with those around him/her. Man can be proud that he has managed to discover the most astonishing tool ever which is called Language.
Firstly, language is a means of communication in any society. It is a system of symbols through which people express their thoughts, ideas, feelings and understand each other, in a word communicate. Generally, people use language in every single action they daily do. People realize that language can exist only in the human society because it is an result which appears after what people interact. This is due to the fact that man is the only being who has the ability of speaking. The language is the characteristic possessed by people which differentiate them from animals.
In the second place, people can use other means of communication such as symbols and signs which are interpreted in the human language. The symbols and signs are shared by the members of one community. Symbols may be spoken, written or signed with the hands. There are some types of signs which are natural, conventional and linguistic. Natural signs are those which happen around people as natural result and which communicate a certain message. For example, a footprint is a natural sign left on a soft surface. In contrast, people are likely to use more conventional signs. Conventional signs are the auditory and visual devices created in order to transmit messages from one person to another. They have different meanings in different situations. The linguistic signs are the abstract structures which participate in a linguistic system or language.
Thirdly, people use either verbal communication or non-verbal one. The non-verbal communication is called body language too. It has a special term "Kinesics" which refers to body movements, facial expressions, eye contact, gestures, body possitions, forms of greeting and their relation to communication. Some kinds of body movements such as yawning, stretching are physiological, others like staring, showing a victory sign are personally and culturally determined.
Later, nobody can say exactly how language came into being. It is only known that humans appeared first and then the language. This leads to some theories according to which it is believed that the language was created by man. First of all, they say that language is a gift of the Gods to humans. Next, humans evolved a Language Acquisitions Device. One theory suggests this perhaps gave Homo sapiens an advantage over Homo neatherthalis. Some other 6 theories are divided into invention or imitation hypotheses and neccessity hypotheses. Invention or imitation hypotheses are: ding-dong hypothesis, pooh-pooh hypothesis, bow-wow hypothesis and ta-ta hypothesis while the necessity hypotheses are: warning hypothesis, yo-he-ho hypothesis and lying hypothesis. These hypotheses state different points why people began to speak by in the end they claim that language appeared due to humans.
In conclusion, I would like to point out that language is a very significant property possessed by people. It is a characteristic which gives everybody the possibilty to communicate, express his/her thoughts, opinions and maintain certain relations with those around him/her. Man can be proud that he has managed to discover the most astonishing tool ever which is called Language.
Dear friend, your essay is really nice. I like its content, you did a good job. Although I have to mention some things that could be revised.
RăspundețiȘtergereConcerning the introduction, I think the first sentence should be omitted. There should not be the personal point of view as far as I know.
Concerning the first paragraph: “ Generally” might be delete, the sentence is nice without it.; “People realize that language can exist only in the human society because it is an result which appears after what people interact.” The second “ people” maybe is better to say “… it is a result of their interaction” because it seems you talk about different people. Also it seems that the last two sentences are additional somehow.
When it comes to the conclusion you use again the personal pronoun “ I “. I think you should reformulate that sentence.
1st paragraph:
RăspundețiȘtergere- the first paragraph to rewritten. Actually, I don't understand what you wanted to say there. Be also careful when using 'to be inclined for' as it expresses a thought that is not certain!
- what's the purpose of your essay? to agree?
- In the first paragraph, you are expected to proceed from more general to more specific. You could explain why the topic is important. And gradually narrow down tot he thesis statement.
YOU SHOULD RECONSIDER THE ORDER OF YOU PARAGRAPHS. e.g. you mention something about the origins of language somewhere at the end. Do you think it's appropriate?
2nd paragraph:
- 'firstly'???
- 'in a word'???
- 'People realize that...' what do you mean?
- 'This is due' - are you sure that is the cause to the previously stated effect?
- in what way is the last sentence linked to the previous one?
3rd paragraph:
- I don't understand in what way this paragraph is related to your aim. Why do you have to tell all that information? In what way does it develop the thesis statement?
4th paragraph:
- the same objection concerning this paragraph!
5th paragraph:
- 'later'?????????
- I have already mentioned that it's misplaced!
- 3rd and 4th sentences!!!! don't contradict yourself!
- the last sentence is incomprehensible!
- why have you enumerated all those theories???
6th paragraph:
- 'property'???
- 'discovered'???
- is that a concluding paragraph???